It was now 7:00 only two more hours till the dancing (The REAL party).
"Let me get his straight, so Mr.Jefferson killed my dad and Mr.Jefferson went somewhere, AND, I am talking to my self. Eww, what is that gross SMELL? Snif Snif." Reia thought in her head as she opened her brown eyes and found herself smelling a shoe. Joy's shoe.
"It worked! She woke up." Joy hinted as she strolled the sneaker away from her friend's nose.
"What are you trying to do? Paralyze me!?" Reia questioned. "Ok, I know I have been acting weird latley and smelling weird things too, but what if my dad isn't dead after all? "Because in the note we read earlier it said "I will be trying to get more money". So maybe he's making my dad take money out of the bank he works at and ordering it to the school by calling the bank and letting Mr.Jefferson talk on the phone because remember my dad is dead."
"WHOA! Slow down, you have a detailed BRAIN!" Joy cried doing a coocoo sign that was pointing at Reia.
"But what if..what if that was true?" Reia exclaimed as she stood up and paced toward her party.
"What if there was no what ifs?" Joy replyed as she followed Reirei into the party. Reia was stuck. Just stuck. Reia, once again for the 3rd time snuck out back to Vista Ridge with her hot car and hid the cute car right by this other red car.
"Hello! Hello?!" Reia screamed twice. Her voice echoed inside the building.
"Shhhh. There are some people talking afternoon classes. And who are you?" a woman cried.
"Umm... sorry, I thought the school was empty. Oh and my name is Reia I just came here to see if Mr.Jefferson was here.
"Well, I saw him in the Boy's restroom. But you should wait when he is done you wouldn't want to go in there." the woman said.
"Thank you!" Reia cried as she headed toward the boy's restroom.
"Tick tick tick tick." Reia's watch ticked as Reia started to give up.
"Oh COME ON!" Reia shouted getting annoyed that Mr.Jefferson wasn't coming out. After 10 minutes later Reia starred at the clock, it was 7:30. Finally Reia stepped into the boys bathroom and thinking in her head "It isn't the end of the world. He has to be in there not just to go to the restroom but to do something secret"
Reia tried not to make a peep. She even took off her convers to they won't squeak. She slowley looked into every stall from the crack and trying to aviod the gross smell. None. When she reached the biggest last stall her eyes caught something! A man tied up!
Friday, March 18, 2011
Thursday, March 17, 2011
24 Hours of Gloominess Chapter 5: The Talk with Mr.J.
"Mr.Jefferson! Huh,huh,huh." Reia screamed as she bargged into Vista Ridge.
"What seems to be the problem? Oh and I am very sorry about the accident about your father and happy birthday!" Mr.Jefferson quickley cried.
"Thank you. I came here to say did you see it happen? You know the accident about my dad?" Reia quiestioned still trying to catch her breath.
"No, of course not, I am way too far busy to see what goes on outside of this building. One of my PTA members had seen it. So I told my brother and because your dad was really ric- I mean important so I decided to put it on the news." Mr.Jefferson said.
"Oh, well thank you for this little talk. Bye." Reia replyed gloomly as she waved bye and jogged away. But while she was walking, the conner of her eyes caught a convertable that was the same exact one she had got for her 16th birthday by her very own dad!
"Oh my gosh! It Isn't ruined!" Reia shouted as she rushed over to the veichle. "Mr.Jefferson or the PTA member must have made up an lie! And Mr.Jefferson was about to say umm... rip, rit, rig, RICH! So Mr.Jefferson just wanted to have the money! I knew I couldn't turst that old man! " Reia screamed all in frustration as she got into her birthday gift and started to drive real slow like an turtle so she wouldn't get caught driving with no drivers licences.
"Mom!!!" Reia said as loud as her voice would last.
"Honey you got the car back? It Isn't ruined?" Reia's mom cried confussed.
"You know Mr.Jefferson, well he killed our dad, he just wanted to get into his wallet!" Reia screamed.
"I knew I couldn't trust that old man!" Reia's mom cried sounding as if she had just solved an mysterey. Mrs.Post and herself paced to Joy to tell her the "news".
"OMG! I knew I couldn't trust that old man!" Joy screamed.
"Yep, we are all on the same page." Reirei exclamied. So what should we do? I mean it's not like we solved anything. They just rested and thought of ideas that poped in their heads.
"I've got it! We should team up!" Joy said as she ran to go grab Josh, Jake, and Jake's group(3 people) from the party so that they would have a group. Jake was with Joy, Jake's group was together, and Reia and her mom were together.The eight people marched to Vista Ridge with all of the girls dresses flowing in the wind. They tip-toed to Mr.Jefferson's office to find any luck. Luckely they found a notebook paper crumbled note saying "Dear family, dad went to work today and got over 100 dollers! Aren't I an awesome worker? In the meanwhile daddy will be in the building trying to get more money. If you need me I will be in the computer lab. If I am not there I am somewhere else in the building. Love, Your dad." read the note.
"Ugh!" Reirei screamed showing a disgusted face after she had read the note.
"He is in the computer lab! Now we surley got him!" Jake shouted heading toward the computer lab.
"Not so fast! He wrote that in the note so if the note ever gets in the wrong hands no one will really know where he is dummie!" Reia cried as Joy her friend blurted "BURNed!"
"How about we split up?" Mrs.Post asked as they all agreed and spilt in other dierections like a bunch of ants doing their job. Jake who still couldn't understand what Reia had told him checked the computer lab just to be sure. Reia on the other hand checked all the classrooms upstairs and found no luck. They practicaly tore up the whole building. Nobody from the group had luck. All of them were bummed out execpt Reia who was quiet ever since they went on the search for her dad. She was thinking really hard and everybody knew that she was because she was doing her thinking face which looked like she was a blind person trying to read something.
"Hmm... hmmm...hmmm." Reia mumbled still thinking.
"Ok, we get it with the hmmm thing ma bob. Can we just get this over with? We are going to miss Reia's party!" Joy exclaimed. They stumbled back home where the party was. Nobody really noticed the people who left. Which was a good thing. Reia was still thinking and nobody knew what she was thinking about, only if she could finally talk.
"What seems to be the problem? Oh and I am very sorry about the accident about your father and happy birthday!" Mr.Jefferson quickley cried.
"Thank you. I came here to say did you see it happen? You know the accident about my dad?" Reia quiestioned still trying to catch her breath.
"No, of course not, I am way too far busy to see what goes on outside of this building. One of my PTA members had seen it. So I told my brother and because your dad was really ric- I mean important so I decided to put it on the news." Mr.Jefferson said.
"Oh, well thank you for this little talk. Bye." Reia replyed gloomly as she waved bye and jogged away. But while she was walking, the conner of her eyes caught a convertable that was the same exact one she had got for her 16th birthday by her very own dad!
"Oh my gosh! It Isn't ruined!" Reia shouted as she rushed over to the veichle. "Mr.Jefferson or the PTA member must have made up an lie! And Mr.Jefferson was about to say umm... rip, rit, rig, RICH! So Mr.Jefferson just wanted to have the money! I knew I couldn't turst that old man! " Reia screamed all in frustration as she got into her birthday gift and started to drive real slow like an turtle so she wouldn't get caught driving with no drivers licences.
"Mom!!!" Reia said as loud as her voice would last.
"Honey you got the car back? It Isn't ruined?" Reia's mom cried confussed.
"You know Mr.Jefferson, well he killed our dad, he just wanted to get into his wallet!" Reia screamed.
"I knew I couldn't trust that old man!" Reia's mom cried sounding as if she had just solved an mysterey. Mrs.Post and herself paced to Joy to tell her the "news".
"OMG! I knew I couldn't trust that old man!" Joy screamed.
"Yep, we are all on the same page." Reirei exclamied. So what should we do? I mean it's not like we solved anything. They just rested and thought of ideas that poped in their heads.
"I've got it! We should team up!" Joy said as she ran to go grab Josh, Jake, and Jake's group(3 people) from the party so that they would have a group. Jake was with Joy, Jake's group was together, and Reia and her mom were together.The eight people marched to Vista Ridge with all of the girls dresses flowing in the wind. They tip-toed to Mr.Jefferson's office to find any luck. Luckely they found a notebook paper crumbled note saying "Dear family, dad went to work today and got over 100 dollers! Aren't I an awesome worker? In the meanwhile daddy will be in the building trying to get more money. If you need me I will be in the computer lab. If I am not there I am somewhere else in the building. Love, Your dad." read the note.
"Ugh!" Reirei screamed showing a disgusted face after she had read the note.
"He is in the computer lab! Now we surley got him!" Jake shouted heading toward the computer lab.
"Not so fast! He wrote that in the note so if the note ever gets in the wrong hands no one will really know where he is dummie!" Reia cried as Joy her friend blurted "BURNed!"
"How about we split up?" Mrs.Post asked as they all agreed and spilt in other dierections like a bunch of ants doing their job. Jake who still couldn't understand what Reia had told him checked the computer lab just to be sure. Reia on the other hand checked all the classrooms upstairs and found no luck. They practicaly tore up the whole building. Nobody from the group had luck. All of them were bummed out execpt Reia who was quiet ever since they went on the search for her dad. She was thinking really hard and everybody knew that she was because she was doing her thinking face which looked like she was a blind person trying to read something.
"Hmm... hmmm...hmmm." Reia mumbled still thinking.
"Ok, we get it with the hmmm thing ma bob. Can we just get this over with? We are going to miss Reia's party!" Joy exclaimed. They stumbled back home where the party was. Nobody really noticed the people who left. Which was a good thing. Reia was still thinking and nobody knew what she was thinking about, only if she could finally talk.
24 Hours of Gloominess Chapter 4: The Party Hourz
"-Potter Jefferson." Reia repeated reading the last part of the article on her bed. " I've heard that name before. I got it! That's Mr.Jefferson our princabal's brother.
"Honey! Time to have your early lunch before your party! Bring Josh too." Mrs.Post bellowed as she finished her third hot cake.
"Yo dude!" Josh yelled to Reia as he sat down in his chair.
"I am a dudet." Reia cried as her spit went flying to Josh's face.
"Dude,dudet whatever, but now you can't get your drivers and I am not going to teach you." Josh bragged as he dryed off the spit with his hairy arm.
"Why would I want to learn from you?" Reia questioned enjoying herself with another peice of hot cake
"Are you guys fighting again? We don't need the drama, we had enough today." Mrs.Post said as she wrapped the 50 hot cakes. The rest of the eating was quiet. The only sound that was made was the chewing noise of the Post's eating. Until Reia broke the silence.
"Ya, the party is starting a 6:00 and right now it is...5:40! We already decorated the garage and the backyard for the party! Eeek! Can't wait see you there! Love ya Joy!" Reia shouted as she hung up her phone. "Starts at six till ten! See you there!" "Starts at six!" Reia shouted inviting everybody she knew. For the next 10 minutes the birthday girl thought about things such as her dad and Potter Jerfferson stuff. The only thing she knew was she had made a big mistake about her framing Hurk. For the other 10 minutes she changed into a zebra printed strapless dress with a pink giant bow in the middle and left her hair hanging.
"Ding dong ding dong!" the door bell loudley beeped.
"Heyyyyyy Heyyyyyy Heyyyyyy!" Reia screamed as 20 people passed her rectangle door to the backyard, while the crazy people were passing bye Reia got a lot of happy birthday shout outs. Josh was spending time by the chocolate fountain while the other guests were dancing their skills off!
"I guess everybody is having fun."Reia's mom said to Reia in the kitchen by them selfs.
"Ya, everybody except me. I just wish dad was here." Reia replyed giving out a big sigh.
"Aww honey.Might as well have fun, it is your sweet 16th birthday." Mrs.post cried as she gave a pat to Reia on her back. Reia slowley walked out to her backyard where everybody was eating.
"Reirei! Finally found you! When does the karaoke and dancing begin?" Joy asked.
"At nine till ten!" Reia anwsered as she tried to sound as if she was having the best 16th birthday ever when she was kinda not. Reia stepped into her own party and was beginging to have fun. While people were getting refreashments, Reia decided to sneak out to her school to talk to Mr.Jefferson.
"Honey! Time to have your early lunch before your party! Bring Josh too." Mrs.Post bellowed as she finished her third hot cake.
"Yo dude!" Josh yelled to Reia as he sat down in his chair.
"I am a dudet." Reia cried as her spit went flying to Josh's face.
"Dude,dudet whatever, but now you can't get your drivers and I am not going to teach you." Josh bragged as he dryed off the spit with his hairy arm.
"Why would I want to learn from you?" Reia questioned enjoying herself with another peice of hot cake
"Are you guys fighting again? We don't need the drama, we had enough today." Mrs.Post said as she wrapped the 50 hot cakes. The rest of the eating was quiet. The only sound that was made was the chewing noise of the Post's eating. Until Reia broke the silence.
"Ya, the party is starting a 6:00 and right now it is...5:40! We already decorated the garage and the backyard for the party! Eeek! Can't wait see you there! Love ya Joy!" Reia shouted as she hung up her phone. "Starts at six till ten! See you there!" "Starts at six!" Reia shouted inviting everybody she knew. For the next 10 minutes the birthday girl thought about things such as her dad and Potter Jerfferson stuff. The only thing she knew was she had made a big mistake about her framing Hurk. For the other 10 minutes she changed into a zebra printed strapless dress with a pink giant bow in the middle and left her hair hanging.
"Ding dong ding dong!" the door bell loudley beeped.
"Heyyyyyy Heyyyyyy Heyyyyyy!" Reia screamed as 20 people passed her rectangle door to the backyard, while the crazy people were passing bye Reia got a lot of happy birthday shout outs. Josh was spending time by the chocolate fountain while the other guests were dancing their skills off!
"I guess everybody is having fun."Reia's mom said to Reia in the kitchen by them selfs.
"Ya, everybody except me. I just wish dad was here." Reia replyed giving out a big sigh.
"Aww honey.Might as well have fun, it is your sweet 16th birthday." Mrs.post cried as she gave a pat to Reia on her back. Reia slowley walked out to her backyard where everybody was eating.
"Reirei! Finally found you! When does the karaoke and dancing begin?" Joy asked.
"At nine till ten!" Reia anwsered as she tried to sound as if she was having the best 16th birthday ever when she was kinda not. Reia stepped into her own party and was beginging to have fun. While people were getting refreashments, Reia decided to sneak out to her school to talk to Mr.Jefferson.
24 Hours of Gloominess Chapter 3: The Odds
"NO! This can't be not on my 16th birthday!!!" Reia yelled with some tears. Sooner or later Reia's check was dripping with tears and her face was drowned in color. Also,her hot pink pillow was soaking wet. The Posts didnt't have a good half day so far especially Reia beacause her dad had passed away and also there was no one to teach her to drive on her 16th birthday.
"I had waited for the BEST 16th birthday ever but I guess I didn't." Reia said after a long period of silence. At 4:30pm Reia's brain cleared out of all the junk about crying because that didn't help at all. Then, all of a sudden she remembered something! She asked herself "How could dad have died? He was with me... That means sombody killed him maybe when I went to grab my friends."
"Mom, I will be back I just got to grab my math text book at the school." Reia told her mom knowing that lying wasen't the good thing but she had to do it. She rode her bike to her dad's work, the Cedar Park Bank.
"What have you done to my dad! Spill it! I know karate and I am not afraid to use thoughs skills!" Reia shouted barging into the bank. Everybody who was working in peace just starred at the16 year old teen.
"Young lady! This is a bank not a play room!" a manager shouted. After an awkward silence Reia spoke.
"FYI! I just turned 16! I need to speak to Hurk." Reia cried feeling confident. A man in a plad uniform stepped foward to the front where Reia was and the mighty manager was.
"Yes? I am Hurk." the man spoke.
"What have you done to my dad? And how did you know my dad died maybe because you killed him!" Reia shouted jumping ahead of her plan. The workers formed a crowd and they oood and aaad. The manager's face turned the color of an ripe tomato, showing that she was angry.
"I didn't kill your dad! Why would I kill your dad, he was by favorite partner! Now I've got Colban! No offence." Hurk explained as he shurged his shoulders.
"Hey!" Colban bursted.
"Then how did you know my dad died?" Reia blurted. Once again the mob of people oood and aaad.
"Because it was on the newspaper." Hurk cried pointing at the newspaper he had picked out this morning. "He died because a car bumped into him while he got out of your new car." Hurk said. Right when Hurk said that the crowd was quiet. Hurk gave Reia the newspaper to read and Reia rode her hot pink bike to her house.
"I had waited for the BEST 16th birthday ever but I guess I didn't." Reia said after a long period of silence. At 4:30pm Reia's brain cleared out of all the junk about crying because that didn't help at all. Then, all of a sudden she remembered something! She asked herself "How could dad have died? He was with me... That means sombody killed him maybe when I went to grab my friends."
"Mom, I will be back I just got to grab my math text book at the school." Reia told her mom knowing that lying wasen't the good thing but she had to do it. She rode her bike to her dad's work, the Cedar Park Bank.
"What have you done to my dad! Spill it! I know karate and I am not afraid to use thoughs skills!" Reia shouted barging into the bank. Everybody who was working in peace just starred at the16 year old teen.
"Young lady! This is a bank not a play room!" a manager shouted. After an awkward silence Reia spoke.
"FYI! I just turned 16! I need to speak to Hurk." Reia cried feeling confident. A man in a plad uniform stepped foward to the front where Reia was and the mighty manager was.
"Yes? I am Hurk." the man spoke.
"What have you done to my dad? And how did you know my dad died maybe because you killed him!" Reia shouted jumping ahead of her plan. The workers formed a crowd and they oood and aaad. The manager's face turned the color of an ripe tomato, showing that she was angry.
"I didn't kill your dad! Why would I kill your dad, he was by favorite partner! Now I've got Colban! No offence." Hurk explained as he shurged his shoulders.
"Hey!" Colban bursted.
"Then how did you know my dad died?" Reia blurted. Once again the mob of people oood and aaad.
"Because it was on the newspaper." Hurk cried pointing at the newspaper he had picked out this morning. "He died because a car bumped into him while he got out of your new car." Hurk said. Right when Hurk said that the crowd was quiet. Hurk gave Reia the newspaper to read and Reia rode her hot pink bike to her house.
24 Hours of Gloominess Chapter 2: The Bads
10 minutes later.
"Da- huh? Dad I am not playing around. Where are you?" Reia cried confused. Her best friends walked away, more like friends. "I guess he went back home to grab lunch." Reia said to herself as she bounced off to class.
"Homework is page 16 chapter3." Mr.S. repeated as the all the peoples were changing classes.
"Happy sweet 16 Reirei" Jake, Reia's close friend shouted as he knuckle punched Reirei.
"Ya, happy birthday!" Jake's group cheered.
"Thanks peeps! I'm really in the mood! Can't wait for my 16th party! I will be ridd- I mean driving my new car." Reia hinted in excitement as she skipped in joy to math class her 7th period.
"Pst! Reirei I forgot to study for the math quiz." Joy, Reia's BF whispered in the middle of class.
"This is like the seventh time you forgot to study! I don't know what to do! Your lost! Sorry Joy." Reia replyed.
"Ring!" the school bell rang for people to go home.
"I can't drive my car home my dad took my car. Bye! see you at my party!" Reia explained to Joy.
When Reia got off the yellow bus 303 she asked her mom if she'd seen her dad.
"I don't really know. Wasn't he with you?" Her mother questioned.
"Mmhmm." Reia nodded as she slid in the kitchen to get a cookie. Reia, Josh and her mom got the sweet 16th birthday poster and chocolate fountain, sugar cookies and a microphone for karaoke. They decorated the backyard with sweets, a disco ball, and put tables covered in a bright pink table cloth, Reia's favorite color. All was good until the communicating device jingled.
"I'll get it. Hello this is the Posts? Yes, uh huh, WHAT! Thank you so much for tell-ing m-e. B-ye." Mrs. Post answered sounding like she was about to faint with some tears. "That was your dad's bank partner.He told me your dad died today." Reia's mom told her as if her heart was "really" broken.
"Da- huh? Dad I am not playing around. Where are you?" Reia cried confused. Her best friends walked away, more like friends. "I guess he went back home to grab lunch." Reia said to herself as she bounced off to class.
"Homework is page 16 chapter3." Mr.S. repeated as the all the peoples were changing classes.
"Happy sweet 16 Reirei" Jake, Reia's close friend shouted as he knuckle punched Reirei.
"Ya, happy birthday!" Jake's group cheered.
"Thanks peeps! I'm really in the mood! Can't wait for my 16th party! I will be ridd- I mean driving my new car." Reia hinted in excitement as she skipped in joy to math class her 7th period.
"Pst! Reirei I forgot to study for the math quiz." Joy, Reia's BF whispered in the middle of class.
"This is like the seventh time you forgot to study! I don't know what to do! Your lost! Sorry Joy." Reia replyed.
"Ring!" the school bell rang for people to go home.
"I can't drive my car home my dad took my car. Bye! see you at my party!" Reia explained to Joy.
When Reia got off the yellow bus 303 she asked her mom if she'd seen her dad.
"I don't really know. Wasn't he with you?" Her mother questioned.
"Mmhmm." Reia nodded as she slid in the kitchen to get a cookie. Reia, Josh and her mom got the sweet 16th birthday poster and chocolate fountain, sugar cookies and a microphone for karaoke. They decorated the backyard with sweets, a disco ball, and put tables covered in a bright pink table cloth, Reia's favorite color. All was good until the communicating device jingled.
"I'll get it. Hello this is the Posts? Yes, uh huh, WHAT! Thank you so much for tell-ing m-e. B-ye." Mrs. Post answered sounding like she was about to faint with some tears. "That was your dad's bank partner.He told me your dad died today." Reia's mom told her as if her heart was "really" broken.
Saturday, March 5, 2011
24 Hours of Gloominess Chapter 1
"Happy Birthday sweetie!" a woman in an pink apron shouted as she brought in a bright pink vanilla cake.
"Mom. You startled me. " Reia weakley responded as she opened her brown eyes and changed into a casual look for her birthday and brushed her red highlighted brown hair.
Reia's dad, Mr.Post was getting ready to teach Reia to drive her brand new veichle he got just a week ago for Reia's 16th birthday.
"Dad? Are you sweating? Oh ok. I know you think I am going to make a dent in your car but you are sweating like you just got a bad report from Josh's teacher. And I haven't seen that face since two years! Boy was that a long time ago!" said Reia.
"Oh, Reirei your ready. I am just so proud of my lit- I mean my grown up daughter." Mr.post replied. "Let's go hit the road!"
"Dad! I am not grown up yet I am still a teen!" Reia pouted as she got in the car and put her seat belt on. "Wait how do you brake?"Reia cried acting dumb.
"Oh Reirei!" her dad laughed.
They drove off to Reia's high school,Vista Ridge.
"I'm going to get my BFFs so they can see my BRAND NEW HOT CONVERTABLE!" Reia shouted with excitement as she went off looking for her friends.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!"Mr. Post screamed.
"Mom. You startled me. " Reia weakley responded as she opened her brown eyes and changed into a casual look for her birthday and brushed her red highlighted brown hair.
Reia's dad, Mr.Post was getting ready to teach Reia to drive her brand new veichle he got just a week ago for Reia's 16th birthday.
"Dad? Are you sweating? Oh ok. I know you think I am going to make a dent in your car but you are sweating like you just got a bad report from Josh's teacher. And I haven't seen that face since two years! Boy was that a long time ago!" said Reia.
"Oh, Reirei your ready. I am just so proud of my lit- I mean my grown up daughter." Mr.post replied. "Let's go hit the road!"
"Dad! I am not grown up yet I am still a teen!" Reia pouted as she got in the car and put her seat belt on. "Wait how do you brake?"Reia cried acting dumb.
"Oh Reirei!" her dad laughed.
They drove off to Reia's high school,Vista Ridge.
"I'm going to get my BFFs so they can see my BRAND NEW HOT CONVERTABLE!" Reia shouted with excitement as she went off looking for her friends.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!"Mr. Post screamed.
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